revise expository essay

Expository Writing

1) Write reflectively in the mode of expository writing.
2) Understand how to write an effective topic paragraph with a clear and concise topic sentence.
3) Use written Standard American English appropriately through an awareness of common errors in grammar and mechanics.
4) Work effectively as a peer reviewer to give and receive peer feedback on emerging drafts.
WRITE a process essay using standard American English
.FORMAT your essay following basic MLA guidelines.
NO plagarism, NO sources and Citations! 500 words mininum
Essay Prompt: Explain a process that you are good at..Include good transitions, vivid details, and focus on clarity and coherence.
Hello Tutor, I am needing YOUR help with a essay that I need to REVISE for a much better grade!! This essay I previously have done on “Good Parenting ” was a low grade.. My instructor has given me chance to redo it and make changes for a chance at an A!! So I am taking the chance to redo it!! I have posted above the instructions and prompts for this essay.. I am including my original essay that was a low grade, to give you an idea of how to make a better one, on being a good parent.. thanks so much!!!