traveling has psychological benefits 1

1300-1500words

no plagiarism

must be APA format（no abstract）

academic language used appropriately

direct quotes（2-3） and paraphrase（2-3）

there are at least 8 strong supporting sentence per paragraph

a strong interesting hook

a strong thesis statement （includes main idea and 3 supporting ideas in 1 sentence）

each body paragraph has a topic and concluding sentence

the paragraph contains transition sentences linking the paragraphs

there is a strong conclusion paragraph that restates the thesis statement

all source are from credible resources

contains at least 5 correct in-text citation（1pt each）

use a variety of coherent and formal sentences，including compound and complex sentence and parallel structure